Hot air balloon writing

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is my punctuation. I need to improve on writing faster.
We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in our hot air balloon.

It would be amazing if I could be on a hot air balloon. It would be so cool if I went across the world. It would be amazing. My hot air balloon is rainbow. The sun is shining beautiful and bright. I would bring food and water. The  hot air balloon was fast. I liked the view of the sunset I loved it so much it was beautiful. I can see lots of animals down on the ground.