Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing.
We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is my ideas.

I need to improve on writing faster.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

I’m a koala I like hanging on the tree I go upside down. I like staying on my tree. We live in Animal Town. I sat and watched the animals. The lion sat on top of the van, the bear sat in the van, the giraffe stuck his head out of the van, he looked at the blue and white sky. He likes mostly likes looking at the sunset, red, yellow and orange . The lazy zebra crossed the road, after he crossed the road he sat in the warm sun and he lazily fell to sleep. The meerkats were thinking, what are those other animals doing?